Callisto

Side long glances, and
Moon lite alleyways,
Obscure the suns gaze; and
Mans aching heart.

Reviews

[bobc]

R...I kind of like this piece. It reads very nicely. But I find I have to ignore what I think are misspellings and a lack of punctuation...they're quite a distraction to me. Intentional? Just one reader though...and it's your poem after all. Thanx...bobc