Thebe

walk lightly
old love,
the howls you will hear...
aeons pass, and change is last,
so why do you still hold dear?
let go of hope,
this ship is sunk (and on the rocks).
the clouded horizon --
paves the way
to the end of yesterday.

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

The distraction of multiple, perhaps conflicting, thoughts show. However, the lines retain an integrity of form throughout. The message is sterling.