Before sleep comes

Before sleep comes

A Poem by MrBlack202

As the sweet wind touches my face,
I lay my head on the cotton clouds of peace.

Where tranquility fills the place,
Where the intimacy of silence unites with the soul.

The ever-replenishing fountain of the soul,
Always yearning for more, yet aware of time's gentle role.

The stillness breaks, and the sound of dawn forms.
A new beginning unfolds, and the sun's kiss gentle upon my face

© 2025 MrBlack202


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Nice poem
The transition between night and dawn is smooth
Loved how starting and ending line mirror each other with its own touch

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MrBlack202

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Thank you for your kind review and taking your time to read it.

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MrBlack202
MrBlack202

Gqeberha, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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