I was late

Lights flashed and time passed. Four legged structures burdened by the weight of man. Like granules of sand, slowly but surely feeling the room. Music fills the air, whispers slowly parish.
Curtains open.
The first steps to success are taken. Cheerful applauds, magnificent awards. The light shines ever brighter. When paternal and maternal eyes not in sight. The last steps to success are taken are taken. Words of faith echo having an impact. The joy in eyes was born, slowing running down my face.

Reviews

[Soren]

This poem for me captures the feeling of self accomplishment when parents that our judges are not there to view. It carries the reader along to the ending. Where joy is expressed?

[MrBlack202]

Thanks for your interpretation of the poem. I'm always happy to receive a positive response from you.

[Betty Hermelee]

I guess the success was seeing something magical for you...inspirational as well... even tho you were late...i believe it's satisfying to to one's mind to have satisfaction..." the light shines even brighter"....
An upbeat poem....thank you for sharing
Warmly, B

[MrBlack202]

Your words are very much appreciated.

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

better late than never. this scene where the world recognises what we have to offer are alive in each one of us. 'The last steps to success are taken are taken' is such a great line too. it inspires one to do the things necessary so we migh attain our meaning of success.
question: what inspired this work?

[MrBlack202]

Thank you so much for the kind review. For me the inspiration is the appreciation people have when you're there for them whether you're late or not.