Gentle words

Gentle words

A Poem by MrBlack202

I stumbled over my words, and my heart is racing against my mind. An internal conflict arised, leaving all logical reasoning behind. The gap shortens, before the warm embrace of two souls. The gap widens, after silent words remain unspoken. Time passes by, senses return, and these gentle words preserved.

© 2024 MrBlack202


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Sometimes we hold our pen and start to write and nothing comes out....but those hidden word are there tickling your brain...then in a flash you remember them and are ready to spill your heart....it happens to all of us......
Nice work!
Warmly, B

Posted 5 Hours Ago


MrBlack202

2 Hours Ago

Truly speaking I had that feeling sometime back. Thanks for the thoughtful review
Betty Hermelee

2 Hours Ago

you’re very welcome🌷Warmly, B
Well written the passage of communication in a relationship. Hopefully they remain gentle words

Posted 1 Day Ago


MrBlack202

1 Day Ago

Thanks again for all the wonderful reviews you left me.
Soren

1 Day Ago

My pleasure

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Added on November 19, 2024
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MrBlack202
MrBlack202

Gqeberha, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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I'm a young individual whose willing to learn and try new things. Comments on my work would be appreciated. more..

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