This world

Heavenly sent I may be mistaken. Left on the earth am I forsaken. With a higher purpose, shall I seek guidance. Words of authority and a over flow of abundance. Your will carves the path ahead. Just as kings and queens we tread.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

very empowering. doubt is essential component of faith, but to make that leap is what will grant us salvation in this lifetime. it is not easy to walk in this path but we must.

[MrBlack202]

Especially when the path ahead is blurred.

[Marie]

Lovely use of metaphor in this sublimely penned poem. We all have a higher purpose and it becomes apparent with the passing of time and with the wisdom we have gained. I agree, that will carves our path for us as we journey through life, as we are gifted with free will, but responsible for the choices we make. I love the equality seen between Kings, Queens and 'ordinary' human. All are seen as being the same! A very nicely crafted spiritual write which I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing, Mr. Black...

[MrBlack202]

Thank you, I hope you found the poem spiritually uplifting

[Marie]

Most welcome, dear poet. Yes, I did and thank you again for sharing...

[emmajoygreen]

Start to finish your words are generously laid advice as to how to find what's needed, what will give your spirit calm, gentle thought and gentle being. 'With a higher purpose, shall I seek guidance.' Whatever our lives, we should try to find precious guidance, Mr.Black

[MrBlack202]

Thank you, your kind words are much appreciated emmajoygreen

[red93]

Very interesting and I found the Piece spiritually uplifting. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[MrBlack202]

I'm glad you feel that way about ny poem. Your kind words are much appreciated

[Soren]

A very Christian feel to a poem that pleads for deeper exploration. The frist phrase implies doubt and the need for faith. The second sentence could be taken for our separation from God, light, immortality, the whole garden of Eden issue. Given the abundance of what Earth produces, opportunity. The next sentence is ambiguous as to who it the you, the reader or God. The issue of free will and if God following of commandments and accepting his will. The last sentence could refer to ruling over the earth or royallinage as sons and daughters of God. Then again this is just my take

[MrBlack202]

You've broken down the poem step by step while explaining the meaning behind each. Your analysis of the poem is spot on. Although one thing I lack is how to analyse poetry in detail.