This world

This world

A Poem by MrBlack202

Heavenly sent I may be mistaken. Left on the earth am I forsaken. With a higher purpose, shall I seek guidance. Words of authority and a over flow of abundance. Your will carves the path ahead. Just as kings and queens we tread.

© 2024 MrBlack202


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Start to finish your words are generously laid advice as to how to find what's needed, what will give your spirit calm, gentle thought and gentle being. 'With a higher purpose, shall I seek guidance.' Whatever our lives, we should try to find precious guidance, Mr.Black

Posted 2 Months Ago


MrBlack202

2 Months Ago

Thank you, your kind words are much appreciated emmajoygreen
Very interesting and I found the Piece spiritually uplifting. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 2 Months Ago


MrBlack202

2 Months Ago

I'm glad you feel that way about ny poem. Your kind words are much appreciated
A very Christian feel to a poem that pleads for deeper exploration. The frist phrase implies doubt and the need for faith. The second sentence could be taken for our separation from God, light, immortality, the whole garden of Eden issue. Given the abundance of what Earth produces, opportunity. The next sentence is ambiguous as to who it the you, the reader or God. The issue of free will and if God following of commandments and accepting his will. The last sentence could refer to ruling over the earth or royallinage as sons and daughters of God. Then again this is just my take

Posted 2 Months Ago


MrBlack202

2 Months Ago

You've broken down the poem step by step while explaining the meaning behind each. Your analysis of .. read more

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Added on September 10, 2024
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MrBlack202
MrBlack202

Gqeberha, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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