You without me

Where would you be without me. When you're lost and all you seek is the eternal peace death. Where would you be, when I take my last breathe. Where would you be without me, when you heart quickens with haste, against peasants. Where would you be without me, when your eyes find delight in my presences. But surely close by, next to the warmth of my heart.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

A beautiful love theme with lot of philosophical questions. Excellent writing 👍

[MrBlack202]

Your comment is very much appreciated.

[Soren]

Questions with an implied answer. This poem evokes feelings of dependency of another person upon the writer. Nicely expressed in question form.

[MrBlack202]

I appreciate the kind review.