At my highest moment

At my highest moment

A Poem by MrBlack202

When the sweet nectar is squeezed, they are no longer pleased. With wrinkled hands that tell time. They reach out to touch mine. These nurturing hands that tend to my every need, but only blossom for a season. I plead with every reason. That thou shall not wither away. For at my highest moment I still pray.

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This one seems to concern one greatly beloved, one who provides care on more than one level. Apparently this person's health is fragile, for there is fear they won't survive. Let the speaker's prayer be answered.

Posted 2 Months Ago


MrBlack202

2 Months Ago

The speaker also remembers, those he holds beloved. Even in his highest moment of success.
Beautifully expressed. There is that longing in this write that comes across well. These lines tell all,
I plead with every reason. That thou shall not wither away. For at my highest moment I still pray.
Thanks for writing and sharing, MrBlack.

Posted 2 Months Ago


MrBlack202

2 Months Ago

Thanks for the feedback.

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Added on August 22, 2024
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MrBlack202
MrBlack202

Gqeberha, Eastern Cape, South Africa



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