how ya like me now

im back baby

how ya like me now?
I'm back and about
how bout we meat
so i can pound you to mince meat

I'm tired of all the crap
wish you'd shut your trap
just remember I'm a new man
when I"m finished you'll feel like flan

Its been a while friend
its your neck I'm gonna bend
its time to finish this
Its somethin you won't wanna miss

you'll remember me
cause i float like a butterfly and sting like a bee
guess what I'm back
how ya like me now?

Author's Note

wrote this shortly after my first fight freshman year

Reviews

[Imagination-mage]

woah, don;t wanna meet u in a dark alley. this is awesome

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

It is really good and I love how the frustration shows within your writing.However I do think that this could be better if you actually used punctuation lol XD

[White Ink]

haha woo i like it!

[sugar]

thats how i feel when im fighting someone(in boxing) it is great

[misha]

This is nicely written. Great job!

[Little Miss]

I like it alot.
Its kinda dark but a real nice read.

[gothicchica]

i like it

[piggy]

school yard bully?

This is awesome!!! Enjoyed this write it's cute.

[nicko11000]

it is funny