Pins and Needles

I hate this feeling, espically when ive just got up from sitting for two hours in the movie theatre (whether i slept through the movie or not) and i get the dreaded pins and needles! Enjoy! :D

Pins and needles pins and needles

By god ive lost my hand!

Pins and needles pins and needles

I can no longer stand

Pins and needles pins and needles

Those b******s took my leg

Pins and needles pins and needles

On my hands and knees i beg

Pins and needles pins and needles

Please lord releave this pain

Pins and needles pins and needles

Oh shall i die in vain?

Pins and needles pins and needles

My time has almost come

Pins and needles pins and needles

Well.. that was actually kind of fun

Author's Note

Well, i find it fun :P

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

This was very amusing. The rhymes have great rhythm and they keep the poem moving. I love the way you ended it--I also kind of enjoy the pins and needles feeling once it's over. Just one spelling mistake--"releave" should be "relieve."

[qaralynn]

hahahaha I like ur sense of humor XD nice!!!

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow.
I love the rhyming scheme here.
Pain for fun.....I don't think anyones ever thought about that one before.
That was very creative of you.
I really love this,
it reminds me of Black Veil Bride's Knifes and Pens.
Great Work!

Wow, all i can say is i love the flow & rhyme scheme. {This is amazing} so well written.