The Shower of Life

Enjoy :D or utterly disapprove!!! :P

Life to me is like a steaming hot shower,

Oh how i could wash and loath for an hour.

But just like life, there must be an end,

As much as we'd love, an eternity to spend.

So just like the end of winter, summer, spring and autumn,

We shall end life's shower with a soft wrinkled bottom.

Author's Note

Hellooooooooo

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

:D Nice comparison! It's eloquent but also fun.

[Star Bright]

This put a smile on my face (: You are an amazing writer and I'm happy to read your poems!

[qaralynn]

I like it XD nice write

i enjoyed this piece, nicely done!

[Daniel Affsprung]

I always think of my poems in the shower, and write 'em write afterwards haha. Oh, and i liked it