My Laptop - Titled: To The Shadows I Run

Its about my laptop, mouse, keyboard, screen, video card, battery, fan, dual core processor, front side bus, and my password! As always, enjoy! or utterly disapprove! :D

Here lies a portal that will guide you to a false entity.

A world where rodents run rampant across streets of plastic,

And a board without keys is a man gone drastic.

To the shadows I run.

Where lithium flames scorch the skin

And desperate fans perspire,

Two beautiful minds, yet one burning desire.

To the shadows I run.

Where a lowly artist resides

Destined to travel only by bus,

They speak of Sir Radeon, he is not one of us.

To the shadows I run.

Mr.Six is the key,

The almighty chosen one.

He will never see light,

To the shadows I run.

Author's Note

Just ask and I will answer.

Reviews

[Gerri Tucker]

I. Love. This.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Wow. I didn't understand a few parts of this, but it was really cool. Very creative idea to write about your laptop. It's funny because it's what's sitting right in front of us the entire time that we're writing, but I don't think I've ever read a poem about a computer on WC before. Especially liked the second stanza.

[qaralynn]

wow makes no sense to me but I like it XD
nice flow :)

I really enjoyed this, i can also interupt this about life as well. Nicely written.

[Unbrokenkiss]

Hm. This was different, but interesting.