lullaby

IT CAME TO ME IN A DREAM

WHERE I HEARD THE CLARITY

OF THE TUNE

MY FINGERS DANCE ON STEEL

THEY SAY

I PLAY FOR YOU

IN LULLABIES

DANCE FOR YOU

AND DANCE THEY DO

IN A LULLABY

MY GUITAR CRIES

picking and strumming

THE MUSIC POURS FROM HEART

AND SAYS

FOR YOU I DO

IN LULLABIES

 

Author's Note

This was written to honor a instrumental song that i wrote on the acoustic guitar called "lullaby"

Reviews

[LadyLove]

Hmm...so the music of your heart comes to you in your dreams...takes form there and becomes the beautiful sounds expressed of what your heart feels for someone. Nice that you can actually play what you are inspired to play. That you can listen to your heart and actually make the tune happen is pretty cool. Blessings!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

Aww, i love it!
It's so romantic, yet cheated and sad.
I can totally relate to it- and your flow was awesome!!!
bravA!!

[Kitty]

I heard this song in my mind.. and I wanted to get my guitar and play.. I wrote a poem similar to this..
Very simple, yet very haunting, and lovely.

Write on,
Melba

[Spoken]

mmm... sweet serene. How i love the power of music, and your words take the form of a the sweet lullaby you describe. Wonderful..

This piece has simple words, yet in its simplicity lies a lot of power. Very Zen.

Great choice of words, great format, good choice of font and color. Well imparted emotion and message.

A wonderful piece.

[justjenn_2u]

To hear this mixed with your acoustic ability, I would probably catch a few tears. A lullaby is soothing, I remember when my mother used to sing me lullabies when I was just a child. How her beautiful voice and words would soothe me more than anything in this world. Music and words can be so beautiful taking the edge off this cruel world full of different intentions. For me, relaxation would mean letting all emotions out in positive vibe. Your words are a lullaby to me in this piece. I want to hear the final result.

[Stacy Hessler]

Yet another fantastic write from you. Such talent you have. I would love to hear the song that you wrote. I bet it is brilliant just like the poetry you write. Keep up your creative genius...I enjoy reading the requests you send. Truly talented....What a gift you have. Please don't stop sharing it with me and the rest of the world! =)

[Mistral Bilgera]

good poem... Like a lullaby, this poem has this "air of solemnity" and tenderness... the words are plain and yet,
"POURS FROM HEART" :) a little melodic... i bet it will be best read with an acoustic guitar playing at the background.

[Wildfleour]

I "followed" Fran here and I'm glad I did. This was a great write.

[Fran Marie]

PLAY FOR YOU

IN LULLABIES

DANCE FOR YOU

AND DANCE THEY DO

IN A LULLABY


Once again your lines of rhyme are enchantingly beautiful

What a lovely piece this truely is~Fran Marie