Mirrors of Love

Ah how blind a lonely heart walks

Onto the dangers of loves page

Like an emaciated lion
walking into a bated cage

Whoa is he who lends a helping hand

To be bitten by the friendly dogs of sin

Yeh is he who perseveres into the light

Who defeats the shadows of the night

I beckon to you all

And of thee who shall fall

I challenge thee to live a life in love

Disassemble a trap of despair

For one you think the world of

I shall help to plant the seed

But only you can water it to grow

Seek the answers in your hearts

And in them God will let you know

 

Author's Note

Not sure where to go with this .Still untitled but would like some feedback none the less.

Reviews

[Cliff Rhodes]

Mr. Lopez,
I really like where you are going with this. There are a few mispelled words, but I am not going to say because I might not spell them correctly myself, ha. So, with that I will say that it is the thought you have here of love and I especially like the following line:

"I challenge thee to live a life in love"

This is what it is all about. Right on!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

I really like this piece!!
It's very unique because of the old english & the subject wich not many people have wrote about!
This piece is one that can be intertreted in many different ways so it makes it relateable to alot of people!
You did a great Job with this one!!
Kudos!!

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Remarkably insightful poem. The responsibility of us all to build up the one who comes across our way. "No man is an Island" and all men affected. Thank you my friend.