Together

Learn to play together

     In your own yard and not in the field

Try to dance together

     In your own hearts using love as a shield

Even cry together

    Not afraid to look weak in the eyes of your friend

Make your plans together

     From the day you unite till days come to an end

Always try together

  When two hearts beat as one the impossible is done

You can rise together

   Lift up don’t tear down

         What God worked so hard to make

Make a child together

    Be proud of this gift to make life out of love

 

Now just watch………….
    and you’ll grow together

To know how it feels to be old and be loved

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

I love the way you repeat "together" throughout the poem...
it adds impact to the theme of togetherness..

This is beautiful ML! Just beautiful...

Why is it true love is captured so beautifully
and purely on paper...
but most of us holding the pens are
walking around lonely or heartbroken..??
Or both..

We should be the Kings and Queens of love,
don't you agree?! lol

Again, this is yet another beautiful work of art,
as is everything you write my friend :)

[Windy]

Beautiful, loving, TRUE, poem here Mr. L, a wonderful job with great flow and imagery. Love it. Thank you. :)

[Cliff Rhodes]

This is a really nice job and very inspiring.

"Lift up don't tear down
What God worked so hard to make"

Very good advice.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

"When two hearts beat as one the impossible is done", Excellent line my friend and so true. Thanks for sharing. I will add this to my library.

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

wow this is beautiful
You capture every emotion perfectly
I love this poem
You're incredibly talented
Kudos

[Mistral Bilgera]

your poems like this one are the ones that really seared in my heart. :)
sweet, short, and full of love.

[Mariah]

Wow, it's like this poem guides you through a lifetime of a beautiful relationship within a few well-chosen words. I'm adding this one to my library. ;)

[Belinda Rice]

wow I love this is is very beautiful and passionate gret job on this on I give you alot of props doing as well as you did with this one..keep them comming

[Beka]

I absolutely love this poem
It's lovely.
So happy.
A wonderful shift.
I love your heartbroken poetry don't get me wrong.
But I've been having a tough time lately and this poem made me smile and helps remind me of how young I'm and all the possibilitys that await me in this beautiful life that we are given.
Thank you dear Mr. Lopez. You have improved my week ten fold.

[Chistie]

Good Job!! I think this one is one of my favorites, you did a really good job!! I love it!!

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

this poem is very strong in truth, love and greatness. i love it. good work. life with another that one loves is something very great to even dream of. i love it.