Are you lost?

Disconnected from my mainline of fortitude

In supplemental elements of tempered time

Unfold the pages of my story in slow motion

Depending on the nature of circumstance

Under developed and/or overkill

Sentiment is thrown to the wind

Reconnected by the source of love

My heart

Reinvented by the most important part

Reassembled I resembled a pillar of stone

For a temple where we gather so

I’m not alone

Remember how you wished one day

You’d find me here?

Disconnected from the years of pain

And weight of fears

There are many who would doubt

That this could all be true

Have you forgotten him?

Because I know

He still remembers you

 

Author's Note

Don't lose sight of your spirituality if you are a believer.

Reviews

[Windy]

New review... after re-reading, after several days or weeks, after many different reason...
I still agree with Dani C., just wanted to say how I felt it strange to still see it in the same way yet differently. You definatly have a talent for "reaching out and touching" be it heart or soul. What a wonderful gift you have.

[Mistral Bilgera]

Have you forgotten him?
Because I know
He still remembers you.

No doubt God blesses you so Much, Mr. Lopez. Keep on using your talents he has given you.
Very inspiring. :)

when all things fail, He's strong and he's with you.... reminds me of footprints in the sand.... :)

[Kriss]

You are such a gifted writer!
you really are!
I can feel your emotions when I read this.
Words are a powerful thing, and you definitley know how to use them!

amazing work!

your friend
♥Kriss

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Amen to that brother. I love the ending "He still remembers you". Also, the conceptualization of the temple of stone. Good write my friend.

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow this is beautiful!!!

[Beka]

It is indeed hard from time to time.
But you understand everything.
Lovely read dear mr. lopez.

[Shadows of Sight]

Oh how true! If any bird were to fail in there beliefs in the GREAT BIRD then all would suffer
Wonderful images bring us close to remember what's important in any of our faiths

Great Write Mr Lopez!

Nature's Essence

[Carole]

Thank you for the reminder in this write of yours. I love even your author's note and I would like to say-I won't. I couldn't. He is the very air that I breathe-my everything. We all need these gentle reminders though. Bless you!

[Windy]

In total agreement with Dani C., couldn't have said it any better myself I am sure. This is another wonder piece. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! :)

[Dani California]

"There are many who would doubt
That this could all be true
Have you forgotten him?
Because I know
He still remembers you"

BAM!

You're being guided.
That's apparent.
Your talent is your tool...
and you're using it well my friend.

I love and truly appreciate what you're doing ML...
your blessings will be many, I suspect!

Awesome! As always...!!