Sculpt Me

With patient heart and tender hand

We find a way to understand

We look beyond the spoken word

For what’s not said but is still heard

When the faithful try to lead the blind

They enrich their lives not leave behind

What’s important to the very end?

That we all have at least one friend

When hypnotized by fruits of sin

We collapse the walls of love within

Beauty need not be transformed

Instead to live for hearts to warm

A flower shouldn’t die alone

A young heart need not turn to stone

When we connect the heart and head

We find that selfishness is dead

When we read between the lines

We free our hearts from painful signs

While nature writes prolific tales

It finds me dreaming of white whales

Focus, focus on what’s good

You’ll find that you’re well understood

Envision this if you can

Because only God can mold a man

 

Author's Note

rambling ranting wannabe poem.rrrraahhhh

Reviews

[Windy]

OMG that was no rambling wannabe, it was SUPERB, I loved it. It had such feeling, the flow was perfect, the ryhming well done, the message given (and recieved) The imagery was just enough... I can't say how very much I enjoyed reading this, it is definatly a favorite. From beginning to end, done just RIGHT! BRAVO Mr. L...(applauding you right now) PLEASE keep posting, I look forward to it though now you are really going to have to work at it because for me at least, this is going to be hard to beat. KUDDO"S to you. ;) ;) ;)

[Poetic Injustice]

Well done. Very nice, indeed.

[Mariah]

You really gave this poem a great flow. Way to go on the rhyming factor. It's different; I like it.

[Deborah Shepard]

totally loved it , well written in the heart , so true

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Beautiful poem. It flowed great and the rhyming was awesome. I especially loved the last line. :) really helped make your point of the poem.

Great write.