Lost at Sea

What happens when you lose sight

Of your northern star?

I’m sure it’s just like losing sight

Of whom you really are.

 

What do you do when your world

Is turned upside down?

And sharks await in hopes that soon

You’ll swim for solid ground

 

It seems I’ve lost directions of

Where to steer my life

I pray to God that sometime soon

On me he’ll shine some light

 

So now I’m set a drift, I float

I’m lost at sea

Maybe when I’m found

There will still be some life in me

 

And when they ask

“What happened to the twinkle in your eye?”

I’ll say

“She was the only star in my northern sky”

 

Author's Note

Everyone is probablyh getting sick of my heartbreak poems but "I writes what i feels in hopes that i heals" ugugugugugug!

Reviews

[Dani California]

lol.. poetry is expression. and if you're heartbroken, well then... that's what you express.

this is masterfully crafted just like everything else of yours that i've read. it's full of emotion and impacts the reader with your pain. ML... again, you are a magnificent writer!

and if writing about your heartbreak is therapy for you, then by all means...

write it! :)

God's undying love,

Dani

(i apoloigize for the all lower case. it was a long hard work week and i don't feel like bothering with the shift button. lol)

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Awww I love this poem!
*Tear* it's so beautiful!
I know where ur coming from with the heartbreak poems I write alot about heartbreak too.
I can't write about being in love happily when the only love I have is forbid by my mom who I respect.
Nuf bout me...this poem is amazing!
I love the way ur ryhems flow perfectly!!
Good write!
Keep up the good work!!!
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[Chistie]

Funny note! Just to let you know i love your poems, heartbreak or not you rock!! Haha that rhymed! yea me! Anyways, yet another beautiful poem from one amazing poet! Good Job! Love it!!