Whispers Heard

With every mountain that I climb

In every sunrise that I see

I find inside my heart

The man that God intended me to be

Without the hate, confused distrust

The scattered pieces of who I was

To be released from all my pain

I climb for life that I regain

Through high tree tops his whispered word

His message is now loudly heard

In every smile that is free to take

From ashes I can finally wake

Now the mountain top is what I seek

So I can see who I’m to be

And when I find his Godly view

Another man

I will be new

 

Reviews

[LadyLove]

All people need peace in their lives from somewhere; For you it's your faith. It's never too late to find your soul...and you show that you have your connection to it very well in place. You done much now to overcome the chains of who you once were...and are happy for it. That is apparent in how you express it here. I'm happy for you in that. Blessings!

[Cliff Rhodes]

Very inspiring piece this is and good visualization.

[Windy]

Love this, it is full of faith and hope and sincerety. Absolutly love how it reads, perfect flow, rhythem, feeling, even the image of the mountain shines so brightly through. 'Super job, Bravo my friend.

[Carole]

Your poems are fabulous, ML. I have been in your corner of the Cafe an hour now, and all I have got to say is WOW! WOW! Fabulous-thought provoking-heart felt writes! Keep up the great work...carole

[Jessi]

Another beatiful write I love everything you do. You put so much feeling and meaning into your peices i always enjoy reading them

[Kelly D. Burris]

What an uplifting determined piece you have here. I really like it how you acknowledged the past and pain but are using it to move on to a better place, a place where you are what God created you to be, a place of fulfillment. It feels like the words spur you on.
Great job.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

This was really touching... you made a connection in this piece, which i cannot even begin to explain.. it was beautiful and pleasant!!! i wish i knew what to say like everyone else that gave you reviews, but there's still many things running through my mind.. i like how you make me think and how you can relate to people..

nice job!

~may

[RHEA CROSLEY]

I like the analogy of the mountain top. Having climbed small mountains I appreciate how they challenge your character to grow and then give you a better view of yourself and creation. Mostly i like the perspective you bring out for "it is God who works in you both to will and to do of His good pleasure". Thanks my friend.

[Belinda Rice]

the mountin the we climb for our God is to make us stronger and clearly in here you wrote so wonderfully and words that spoke so peacefully....You fing your self because of God and what he does in your life.He bring you the glory of all thing that we might not be able to see, but all finds that way to bring it to you..

From ashes I can finally wake

Now the mountain top is what I seek

So I can see who I'm to be

And when I find his Godly view

Another man

I will be new


this part here saying so i can see who i am and when i find his Godly view,another man you will be new , thats because the more that you trust in God and believe all the gorly shines in your life and he will create and new person way deep down inside you to cary you in life to make things in your life better..I think in this poem he was giving you the message...I hope that you believe that God can do that for you. this is a wonderful peice..wonderfuly penned...I could not have said it any better then you did right here great job...cant wait to see more...God bless Belinda

[Beka]

Always about changing and finding yourself
We change as we gain information
It is important to be someone you like being
For if you don't like yourself...
Well lets just say its not often that there are souls who will
Different
Yet the same.
Lovely