Wild Flower

Just another cheesy love poem

Come and take a walk with me for a while

Maybe somewhere along the way

We can find the reasons why

We fell in love

Come and take my hand for just a while

We can count the leaves on all the trees

And forget the tears that fell

From you and me

Won’t you take a walk with me?

Down memory lane

Even though we both know

It can’t ever be the same

Come and smile with me for just a while

You can keep the wild flowers that I picked for you

As a reminder that I will never stop loving you

Hold the dreams close to your heart

In those dreams we can never be apart

Come and laugh with me for just a while

And remember we can’t wipe away the years

Of you and me

 

Reviews

[Cliff Rhodes]

I can't see the forest for the trees, meaning that I am not able to look at the structure, because of the feelings that I get from these words. (Good writing.) Memories, memories, and more memories, if I wanted to remember so much, but it reflects back into some that were better off not having any wild flowers picked for. Love never dies but it is better to love again than to stay in the flower beds until the red bugs bite. The best part about love is the good memories. That is why flowers keep blooming, they remember how to do it all over again.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

love is wonderful. great poem. you have written a great piece of art.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

i actually really adore this one; probably one of my favorites from you, even though i know i'm far behind on reading all your new work! i apologize for that, but this is just lovely and it made me wistful and happy and want to sigh :)

hugs

[Chistie]

Oh that was so good!! You write so splendidly!!! I love it! Good job!!!