I know it

There was love in that kiss and I felt it

There was joy in her smile and I shared it

There was hope in her touch

That I needed so much

That would keep me afloat

And she knew it

 

There was truth in her eyes and I saw it

There’s a gift in her heart and she knows it

There would be times I would miss

I could write out a list

With nowhere to send

So I own it

 

Mixed with words left unsaid

And the dreams that are dead

Wrapped with pain and our shame

And I hold it

 

Now the bandage on my heart

That I wear is just there

To remind me she cares

And I know it

 

Reviews

[LadyLove]

I could be wrong on tis one...but it looks to me like she knew all these things aboout herself that were such treasures to you and yet she hurt you with them. Yet you still hold onto what it was and even she knows it somehow but is out of your reach. Well, somehow you seem to need to remember it. Had to have been really special to you to still own it in your heart regardless of the hurt. Be well.

[Mistral Bilgera]

whoah... I guess i got another favorite right here!!!

Such a romantic poem, that even the worst of love's trials can be viewed positively, and lightly!!

I REAAALLLYY love this. Another thing it says? Don't feel frightened to love and lose. i dunno if it is what it says, or if it is the feeling brought to me after reading the poem.... really really amazing... :)

[Carole]

Now the bandage on my heart

That I wear is just there

To remind me she cares

And I know it

Another great write! You are definitely one of my favorite writers. I am sorry it took so long to discover you!!!

[The Tao of Bri]

It is good to know for sure, so it is.. maybe next time she will let you know with a kiss! Great Write!~

[Dani California]

"There was truth in her eyes and I saw it
There's a gift in her heart and she knows it
There would be times I would miss
I could write out a list
With nowhere to send
So I own it"


It must be that cen cali upbringing! LOL!

Yep, you have become one of my favs ML :)
I realize I'm no one important,
but my mother thinks I am! lol!

Magnificent... as usual :)

[Jessi]

Nicely done a very beautiful poem I love it you are very talented

[Beka]

It started out so happy....it reminded me of a relationship I have with my friend caleb....aww caleb.
But I do like it... beauty in the heartbreak.
The good with the bad.

[Poetic82]

I like this one. I truly felt this as I read it. Good job!!!

[Chistie]

You are true romatic!!! Good Job!!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

awwww!!!! that was so sweet and romantic! it sounds like you and this person where really in love!
I could tell that this was written from the heart, because you made me feel how you felt in this poem......
it was like being hypnotized.....but i didn't want it to stop....

nice!!

~may