~Water~

Something I had to write for a creative writing session~

 

Such a curious thing that’s not curious in the slightest

 

Its quenching flow caresses the bodies of many

 

Washes the earth in a fit of chilling kisses

 

 A deep intimacy which cannot be denied

 

 For the world and its entirety can comply

 

 

Wet yet comforting

 

Cold yet we don’t mind

 

Quenching my thirst

 

 Thirst that is forever present

 

 Wet

 

 

A world we swim in filled with shadows of the deep

 

It holds us close without hesitation

 

Carry us to sleep

 

Waves of its power is all that we’ve known

 

And in its depths our tears can not be shown

 

 

 

Like the touch of a lustful man that longs for sexual intimacy

 

It twists and turns across our breasts; our thighs

 

 Trailing an invisible tongue across hardened n*****s

 

The intimacy of it all

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[Writer #00]

Wow. What a transition from the necessities and only mere desires of life itself.
A beautiful gradient of shades of blue.

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