The Song (revised)

Read and share only if I helped change your perspective.

That song

It hits you blind

Right inbetween the eyes

Right where all your pain resides

the spot.

It knows

Knows you better

Knows you more than you know

It knows all while knowing nothing

godlike.

It hits

Special feelings

You can’t brave to venture to

It goes places you do not dare

yourself.

Weaving

Weaving an elixir

Weaving a cure for all

The medicine you do not swallow

The music.

The rhythm

Background to you

Background to all of us

The one thread that links everyone

is us.

Secrets,

Messages hid

Deep within the fibers

The chords of life we all live by

Open them

Look in

Peep the fabric

Look down inside yourself

Find the person you wish to become

Do it.

Pull strings,

Change all the things,

Make it the way you want

Don’t allow it to pass you by

Seize it.

Fuel it

Take all that pain

Burn it for all its worth

The song as your anthem, make it

your b***h.

You will

You can not lose

Nothing can stop this you.

Fight the good fight and have only honor,

You can.

This song

Has pushed beyond

You are passed any limits

You are beyond the bonds that hold you

Unlimited.

Return

Repay favors

Thrive to inspire the ones

Who don’t know how to inspire themselves

Love all

And all will love.

Reviews

[Francis Orion]

I liked this. The beginning pulled me. I am a lover of music and couldn't agree more with you. This poem is written well. It's to maintain the shape with words, they way you did is so challenging. Great job.