Every rose has its thorn...

    Jeramy wades through a crowd of suits and cocktail dresses. He makes his way toward the foyer to say his goodbyes to Mr Freeman. He stands aside and waits a moment, not wanting to interupt a conversation going on between Mr Freeman and his daughter. After a few moments he comes closer, realizing that it is the same girl he's been happily noticing all evening. They share a small, familiar, comfortable smile, as Jeramy begins to say his fairwells.
     "It was nice having you here, Jeramy. I hope you enjoyed your evening. Before you go though, could I ask you one small favour? You see, Gabriella was wanting to go to a friends house, but as you can see I am still busy hosting and have no way of getting her there. Would you mind dropping her off? Its just down the road a few miles, it shouldnt be too far out of the way. Oh, and this, obviously, is my daugher, Gabriella." he says turning to the young woman standing beside him. She watches Jeramy with a wide, pleasent smile. She gracefully extends her hand and he shakes it quickly with his beneath hers in a gentlmanly fashion then looks away.
    "Call me Gabby, please. Its a pleasure to meet you Jeramy." she smiles, admiring his strong facial structure, and fleetingly catching his handsome, deep blue eyes.
    "And you as well, Gabby. Of course! I would be honoured Mr Freeman, It would be my pleasure, I am always happy to help." he smiles and shoots a furtive glance in Gabby's direction. They say their goodbye's and head out to Jeramy's car. He opens the door for Gabby, watching the way her dress moves against her body, the way her hair falls down her back as she takes out the clip that held it place. He smiles and closes the door. Had he been imagining over again in his mind, or was she watching him too? He swallows his smile and climbs into the driver's seat, starting down the drive.
    "So where abouts is her place Gabby?" he asks, looking ahead.
    "Umm... just down this road a ways." she glances over then back down.
    "So... umm... have a good night there, Gabby?" Jeramy says as he starts driving down the road, peering over at her out of the corner of his eye.
    "It was ok. It could have been better... I was kind of bored. Those people always make me anxious and tense, one false move and your judged and shreded like like old news, you know? Its like vultures watching a baby antelope or something..." she looks over, watching his face in the dim light of the passing street lamps.
     "Yeah, I know what you mean!" He laughs and smiles, looking over for a moment, then back at the road.  "So what are you and your friend going to do for the rest of the night?" he looks over again and catches her eyes for a moment, he looks away first, smiling wide.
    "To be honest, I was thinking of just ditching her and wandering around... I dont want to just sit around painting our toenails and talk about her man of the month. I want some excitement. Some action..." she gives him a sly smile, mischeivous and playful. He watches her for a moment, looking her over.
    "I must say Gabby, you are one beautiful girl..." he smiles and holds her gaze. She gives a cute smile for Jeramy's polite comment.
     "Well, Jeramy, you are rather handsome yourself. Would you mind if we just drove around a while?" she looks up at him through long eyelashes, her smile widening.
    "Sure," he says thinking this is his lucky night. "theres a look out a bit further down, you care to take a look with me?"
    "I'd like nothing more than to do just that!" she smiles and quietly rests her hand between the seats. Jeramy moves his hand down, grazing hers gently, pretending he didnt notice it before. He pauses for a moment, his hand against hers.
    "Oops, sorry" he smiles unapologetically, trying to take her hand in his.
    "You have soft hands." Gabby smiles as she takes his hand in hers. She holds his wrist gently with her left hand, softly stroking it a moment. She turns his hand over and slowly traces the lines with the first two fingers of her right hand. Jeramy smiles as a shiver of plesure shoots through his body.
    "Thank you..." he manages to mutter. Gabby closes her left hand in his and her right hand around them. Jeramy pulls the car into the carpark. They are alone. He stops the car in a spot ovelooking the water. He turns off the engine, the lights, and looks over. "Id like nothing more than to kiss you right now" he grins at her, hopefull.
    "Then do it." Gabby challenges him. She gently tugs at his arm, bitting her lip and smiling. "If you don't do it, I will..." she says just as Jeramy leans in to kiss her. Their lips meet in a deep, but quick kiss. Jeramy pulls away, hesitantly.
    "I like your style." he smiles and admires her face, stopping at her lips. He watches her, smiling.
    "Then why did you pull away?" she moves in close, kissing him back. It is a deep, sensual, kiss tinged with thinly veiled hunger.
    "Shall we get into the back?" Jeramy asks, pulling away a bit. He smiles as she follows his lips, kissing him again, quickly.
    "If there is room for us." Gabby smiles and opens her door, stepping out and closing it back. She walks around to his side, waiting for him to open the door. Jeramy smiles a crooked, ammused smile and opens his own door, hopping out and quickly opening the back.
    "I think we can fit." he smiles wide. She motions for him to climb in first. He scrambles in and she follows close behind. As she slides in, one of the straps on her dress falls a bit. Her body grazes his slightly, just enough to send a shiver up both their spines. Jeramy slides closer, gently putting an arm around her. He smiles down at her, sitting as close as possible. Gabby turns her head so that her lips are close to his neck, but not close enough to touch the skin.
    "Jeramy... I'm not wearing anything under this dress..." she looks up and he turns his head slightly, eyeing her wide, impish smile. Jeramy thinks for a moment that seems to last forever, silent, watching, awestruck. She moves her lips closer, he can feel the words as she says them. "What are you thinking?" He smiles wider and looks up, filled with excitement.
    "Well... I'm thinking... maybe you should remove it georgess..." he studders slightly.
    "You do it!" she leans forward, her hands guiding his to the zipper at the back of her dress. She shrugs off the straps and turns slightly, to give him a better view. With his smile now uncontrollable, he slowly zips down her dress, watching her smooth back, her feminine shape from hips to cleavage. He eases the zipper the rest of the way and watches the dress slip down her body gracefully. Jeramy runs his fingertips up her sides, smiling.
    "Mmmmmm... Sexy, Gabby..." he lookes down then back up, meeting her eyes. Gabby smiles, a sideways, mischevious smile. She kisses his neck, just bellow his collar, then up, gently biting his ear, then kissing his lips, a fleeting, playful kiss, she softly nibbles his bottom lip, then pulls away.
     "Now what? Hmm? What do you want to do?" she leans back, fumbling at the buttons on his shirt with one hand. Jeramy smiles and helps with the buttons and assists in the removal of his shirt, letting it fall into the floorboard with Gabby's dress. He fumbles with his belt and undoes his pants, pulling them off, leaving just his boxers.
    "Gabby? Could you help me with these? Please?" he smiles down at her and she rolls her eyes, smiling wide.
    "Since you said "please", I guess I can." she runs her hands up the inside of his legs, softly over his inner thigh, and up the sides,  pulling from the inner leg. She slowly tugs them down and off. Dropping them to the side she gently kisses his inner thigh four or five times. She sits up, her hands resting still, on the sensetive skin of his thighs, close to his rock hard erection. He smiles down at her, pulling her up onto his lap. He gently kisses her neck, biting softly, trailing more kisses down to her breasts. He runs his fingertips down her spine and gently begins suckling her breasts. She sighs and runs her hands up his sides, over his arms, then up and down his back. She finally tangles her fingers in his hair.
    Her breathing shudders a moment, as she becomes intune with the sensations filling her body as his warm, soft tongue, his gentle lips, caress her breasts. Her soft, pink n*****s become firm as he tendrly licks, suckles, and gently bites at them. His hands trace the curves of her hips. She presses him closer to her, massaging his scalp while holding him near her breasts. She smiles with pleasure and looks down at him.
    "Thats exactly the kind of excitement I was looking for..." she smiles and releases a deep, heavy, pleased, sigh. He lifts her off of his lap, laying her down in the seat. He places her feet on his knee and one at a time, picks them up. He brings them to his lips, then he gradually trails kisses over her ankles, up her legs, over her claves, across and along her inner thigh, paying equal attention to every inch of her. He kisses her stomach and rests his hands between her legs, hinting for her to open them. She smiles and does so, revealing herself slowly. His tongue traces down over her c**t and around the lips, and gently eases inside her sex.
    "Ahhhhhh!!....thats even... even better..." she studders, smiling. Jeramy savours the smell and taste, so sweet and warm, the small, soft, sounds of her in pleasure make the moment complete. He runs his tongue from side to side, up and down, and slowly in and out of Gabbriella, enjoying it as much as she does. He places his hands on her hips and gently helps her start a slow, rocking motion. She smiles and rocks in time with him. Moaning softly, she smiles wider, the pleasure brightening her already brilliant face.
    "Soooo, so sexy, babe... What a beautiful flower." Jeramey manages to mutter. 
    "Every rose has its thorn, though..." she mutters under her breath and lies back, enjoying it. He sighs, smiles at her, and continues. He places his hand under her lower back, encouraging her to arch it. She follows his lead, deeply arching her back. She gasps as he licks deeper, mixing up his rythm. He feels her twitching with pleasure. She moans softly, sweetly, writhing under his lips, enjoying the pleasurable sensations running through her body. She moves her hands down, again tangling her fingers through his hair, softly pulling. She lets out a heavy sigh of extasy. He feels her pulse, her sex becomes drenched and beautifully moist. He sees her eyes roll back and makes motions with his tongue, moving it around and around. He stops a looks up at her.
    "You like that, baby?" he says softly and smiles. She nods, unable to speak, and tries to relax, but not to much and waits for him to begin again. She finds her words and mannages to studder.
    "You can keep going, if you like... Do something, dont leave me lying here like this." he smiles up at her and her toes curl as he sticks his tongue in one last time then licks up the front of her, over her stomach, stopping at her breasts and gently suckling them for a moment. She sighs again as he makes his way back to her mouth, kissing her deeply. He sits up and leans back, hinting for her to come and explore him. She kisses him back, gently at first, but then a little more eagerly. She softly nibbles his bottom lip before trailing kisses and soft lovebites down his neck and over his chest.  She slides down over his stomach, and gently to his inner thigh. She smiles playfully and looks up at him for a moment then away. She teasingly, so lightly licks the length of his shaft.
    He mutters something under his breath and moans softly as she gently takes the tip inside her mouth. She slowly massages it with her tongue before opening wide and tasting as much of him as she can. She begins to move back and forth at a medium pace, keeping her rythm uniform and soflty swirling her tongue around the tip on her backward movement. Jeramy watches her eagerly working on his hard on and runs his fingers through her hair.
    "Gabby, mmmmm... Gabby that feels greattt!!!!!.." he moans softly. She looks up at him with dark, mischevious, smiling eyes and keeps her rythm steady. She pulls away for a moment paying a little more attention to its tip with the tip of her tounge, then licking down the length to place a few soft lovebites around his inner thigh before taking the shaft back into her mouth, she looks at him as she strokes him in her hand. She holds his gaze, he smiles down, overcome with extasy. He hints for her to come back up. She goes for a few more seconds, pulling away slowly, again paying close attention to the tip. She kisses his inner thigh, trailing kisses up his stomach, over his chest, up his neck, gently biting a couple of times. She softly nibbles his ear. He sighs and takes hold of her jaw, directing her lips to his, and kisses her deeply.
    "Are you ready, Gabby?" he says softly in her ear, gently biting it.
    "I was ready the moment I saw you walk in the door tonight." she says smiling. She kisses him behind the ear, gently biting his neck. He blushes slightly for a moment, then her lips meet his again. She breathes in deep, then gently breathes out. He takes her by the bum and moves so that his hard on is under her. He places his left hand on her hip and his right hand on the tip of his erection. He helps her down and eases inside her warm, wet flower. He sighs softly and inhales sharply as she slides down his shaft. She bites her lip, softly savouring every moment, every tiny sensation. She wraps her arms around his neck, looking him in the eyes. He looks down, watching her as she falls, until his entire length is inside of her.
    She makes eye contact for a moment, begining to move her hips in a slow, not so even motion, getting into the groove and finding her comfort. She presses gently at first, then in slightly faster, deeper movements. She finds a good rythm and keeps it as best she can. His hands rest on her hips. He watches her rock, gently rises and falls, he smiles a naughty smile capturing her eyes 
    "Man, if your dad knew..." she rises, and falls, locks eye contact and says
    "Who cares?" as she smiles wider and kisses him once, softly, then pulls away, leaning her head back. She keeps going for a while, keeping her rythm as uniform as possible. Jeramy watches as their sexes meet and pleasure shoots through him. He moans a little louder and Gabby stops still with him inside, both still engauged in eachothers eyes, then begins her hips swaying, her whole self just really relaxing, free and open to be expressive. She kisses his neck once more, writhing on top of him, her hands that are resting on his back begin to tighten their grip. Making a deep, soft, purring sound for a few moments, she lets out a soft scream. Her fingernails dig in a bit, but she cathes herself. He feels her pressing close and he cradles her head over his shoulder, running his fingernails slowly down her spine.
  Moaning softly, trying to control her rythm, she trys to keep the motion steady. She breathes in sharply again, forgetting to control herself. Her nails dig into his shoulder blades without her noticing. She keeps going and he moans with a grunt of passion. He watches as she rocks a bit faster.
    "Where can I... where... can I... where can I cum?" he asks shakily in a low, laboured, and concerned voice.
    "Dont.. dont worry about it... I'll deal... with the consequneces" she mutters in his ear and kisses him hungrily, gently tugging at his bottom lip. He kisses her back and bits at her bottom lip a bit harder, then kissing her deeply and holding her firmly and close. Her fingernails dig into his back and she bites her lip a bit too hard, it begins to bleed slightly. She releases a sensual, louder scream as extasy, extreme staisfaction, and release ripple through her body.  She screams louder as, simultaneously, he release four squirts of his pollen deep inside her. He moans with her and they rock for a bit, bathing in each others juices, soaking in each others slowly steadying heartbeats, he kisses her deep and they breathe each other in. She kisses back, trying not to dig her nails in again as the tiny, dizzying aftershocks surge through her. She finally relaxes fully and presses closer, swaying gently with him.
    "You're bleeding..." she says softly, looking at the slight smear across his back.
    "Hahahaha... You're quite a fiesty girl, huh Gabby?" he smiles and stokes her hair and back gently.
    "You bet..." she smiles, kissing him again, biting his bottom lip softly, tasting her own blood and smiling wide "Like I said, we all have thorns..." she runs her hands over his shoulder and he flinches a bit, exhaling sharlply, but smiling. "I'd say sorry... but I thought it was kinda hot... You could've bitten hearder if you'd wanted to, you know..." she smiled and kissed him again, nibbling his lip a bit then resting her head on his shoulder.
    "Next time, Gabby... " he kisses her neck and holds her close, his arms wrapped around her waiste.
    "Next time, huh? How soon can that  be?" she smiles and runs a hand through his hair, catching his eyes. They smile at each other and stare into each others eyes for one long moment. They sit in silence, just holding each other, resting close. After a while sleep overcomes them and they doze off to sleep in each others arms.
 

Author's Note

This is still in the works, please forgive any spelling errors we will fix them when we get around to it. Aside from that, how is it?

Reviews

[HeartsBinded]

Hmmmmmmm..

This brings back some memories *sigh*

There are a few typoes, adn a couple repetitions but overall i think its one sexy write;)

but there is love in it too, so much love, new love, blooming, the ending emplies a beautiful relationship ahead, to me, and not just a lustful "roll in the hay" that most people would assume this is. There is a lot of love hidden between these lines, that the writes have twined into it, im surprised you guys dont have more readers:P ill have to sugest some people *wink*

[John Stussy]

While it does need editing, it's actually very tasteful as far as erotica goes. You built a really solid back story to it, and followed up with a tenderly erotic piece. Great job!