Feeling like a Man Thinking like a Child

self explantory

 

Feeling Like a Man, Thinking like a Child

heart is searching for the answers

when it should be the brain doing the work

feelings of a grown wanting man

but a child's mind reaching thru the murk

rainbow's colors blinding the naked eye

living in a dreamscape of the future

throat goes desert dry as I begin to cry

in this grown up game of tug-of-war

like curious George wanting to know

swinging on this vine of aching love

questions should I stay should I go

looking up but nothing from above

never wanting to cause a bit of pain

looking for a sunbeam through the rain

I must be crazy have I gone insane

rose sunglasses and a pearl white cane

this piece of work cannot explain

the consequences that come to mind

if I do this wrong can I do this right

feeling like a man thinking like a child

Reviews

[Liza]

i see so much maturity in this expression
a child does not have the experience to discern possible outcomes
some men age but that does not mean maturity is an indication

[Gomer LePoet]

Good job my friend, sometimes we all need to evaluate our thoughts

[Jeff]

Very good write. It seems that we are always looking even if we have happiness right in front of our face.

[?]

This is full of emotion
Does the heart ever stop searching?
Always in a tug of war is seems.
I hear you on this one, and feel the confusion and pain
and my own.
Great emotonial heart felt write