A Flower In The Breeze

Just stirring, looking to the light

of the sanctuary of Spirit within.

Just a flower stirring in the breeze,

looking to the whisperings in the sky

and the heart,

of love's grace.

Simply a flower

in her process of growth,

of flowering.

Just a flower resting in God.

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Author's Note

Just sharing. Not taking it too seriously, so no need for critique

Reviews

[zainul]

I can feel God through your flowery poem.

[Morning Star (SJA)]

Thank you so much for this lovely compliment. Blessings to you :)

[zainul]

Your kind words are great treasure for me.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such a soothing, expertly written poem...i hope that the flower is scented, would love to float away too...

[Brandon Mathis]

check out me poems please!1

[Brandon Mathis]

i like it but personally i think you could have put more to it

[Alicia Beavis]

Well, I did have a couple things to say but you don't wish for a critique.

I liked the essence of the whole piece :)