If Only I Would Learn To Listen

If Only I Would Learn To Listen

A Poem by Morning Song
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A Rondelet for PoeticPiers "Introducing The Rondolet" challenge

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It calls to me,

 

This, my kiss, of luminous light.

 

It calls to me,

 

This, my wish, by day unto night

 

Beckoning me, enticingly,

 

It sings to my soul.  Soul, be free

 

It calls to me.

 

 

 

© 2008 Morning Song


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Wow, the picture you posted with this lovely little rondelet is fascinating, Jeri! I could certainly identify the feeling of "free" with the water pouring down. (If you can't post your poem to the challenge, you may not have it "labeled" correctly. I contacted the site owner about a similar problem and had to mark "poem" in both categories in order to access it for the challenge.) :-) Sharon

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderful, simply wonderful my dear friend. Excellently written, could not
fault one thing about it. You have composed a simply beautiful Rondelet
Graphic suited your poem perfectly too!

Hugs
Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, the picture you posted with this lovely little rondelet is fascinating, Jeri! I could certainly identify the feeling of "free" with the water pouring down. (If you can't post your poem to the challenge, you may not have it "labeled" correctly. I contacted the site owner about a similar problem and had to mark "poem" in both categories in order to access it for the challenge.) :-) Sharon

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. Nice one for the "rondelet" poetry contest.
Salam (peace) to you

Posted 16 Years Ago


very beautifuland full of emotions, mary

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Morning Song
Morning Song

Sacramento, CA



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Come on in. I've got the coffee pot on. Just kick off your shoes, grab a chair, and bring me your poems. And hugs are on the house.......Jeri more..

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