If Only I Would Learn To Listen

If Only I Would Learn To Listen

A Poem by Morning Song
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A Rondelet for PoeticPiers "Introducing The Rondolet" challenge

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It calls to me,

 

This, my kiss, of luminous light.

 

It calls to me,

 

This, my wish, by day unto night

 

Beckoning me, enticingly,

 

It sings to my soul.  Soul, be free

 

It calls to me.

 

 

 

© 2008 Morning Song


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Wow, the picture you posted with this lovely little rondelet is fascinating, Jeri! I could certainly identify the feeling of "free" with the water pouring down. (If you can't post your poem to the challenge, you may not have it "labeled" correctly. I contacted the site owner about a similar problem and had to mark "poem" in both categories in order to access it for the challenge.) :-) Sharon

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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the spirited addictions that beckon, and soft thoughts filled with curiousness, that of muses and inspirations, when thought becomes
desire, and feelings take the form of passion that invokes liberty or
those things that set the heart adrift, beyond mere imagination,
but into the art of the craft, wonderful work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so wonderful, I like this a most wonderful write...Kim

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Soul, be free/ It calls to me." but don't worrie because your soul is arleady free, flying all over, covering the Earth! At least i can feel it in this side!
What a wonderful kiss! Lovely!




Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

deserving of a win for sure! simple words arranged in powerful ways proving you don't need big fancy lingo to write something that touches the soul!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kudos for winning third place in the rondelet contest.

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

THIS IS SOOOOOOOO Beautiful
The picture frames it perfectly
Good luck in the contest
Cheers,lea
I just had to come back and reread it again and again! haha ....sorry

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very good rondelet! It is so effective, this repetition of certain words, strong enough to carry a poem to the reader's delight.

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

well written and said
doreen

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good luck in the contest. I love it! I just learned about Rondelets and this one was right on target! Cheers, lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is a beautiful "kiss, of luminous light"! wonderful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Morning Song
Morning Song

Sacramento, CA



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