Don't

     

When I look into your eyes even though

you have gone throught the worst of times.

I wonder whats on your mind. If you stumble

and fall I will be there to ease your pain.

I know you're not strong enough to hold it

all in and keep it from the world. Do not

be fearful of whatever blocks your way.

Some are not all the same and they will

help you find the way. Do not be quick

to judge give it time and it will come.

Do not stop and give up hope give it

some time to cope.

Reviews

[universalove]

ITS BEAUTIFUL THE WAY YOUR WORDS FLOW. IN MY WORLD IT DOESNT WORK OUT THIS WAY. I WILL GIVE ALL WITHIN MY HEART TO RESPECT WHOM SO EVER SHALL MAKE ME FEEL OTHER THAN MYSELF. IT IS NICE TO BE NICE. FROM YOUR POEM YOU HAVE BEEN PASS THE DATING GAME OR LETS MAKE A DEAL. I LIKE IT VERY MUCH .THANK YOU









0

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is a hopeful poem, very beautiful..

[universalove]

this is very nice . you have to cope with everything in life to learn whats comes next. real good

[Tai Chi Italy]

A solid shoulder to lean on poem together with good advice Mornie! Well written..one typo, 5th line, 'you're. Everyone needs a friend like you, smiling at you, Tai