2-8, 8 shows

"Now remember, what ever you do,
what every you think, 17 will be the killer"

Fat a*s house wife,
Jack of Clubs

Bar fly,
4

Cheating salesmen,
6

W***e,
9

'Johny apple-seed'
ACE

Dealer,
KING

10 down, 8 shows,

Queen to Fat a*s house wife's Jack,
Checkmate..........
See you at the breakfast buffet.......

3 is kind to the Fly,
4, becomes a better friend,
Suicide king cuts his throat,
the end.......
Shoo fly,
don't bother me..........



7 to sends the salesman to the massage parlor,
 with a quick stop at the pawn shop first.
Hope the boss doesn't check your expense account.


King of Clubs, reminds w***e pimps motto,
B***h better have my money, not loose it.....

Queen of diamonds,
sends Johnny back to the apple farm.
Keep marching on my son......


Laws of Probability,
Laws of certainty,
Laws of statistics,

rule of thumb/odds......

Age of voting seconded,

Like Caesar,

Dealer dealt the killing blow,
only to end like Porcius Cato.



Never hit on 18.

Author's Note

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Now this was full entertaining and I was not able to move my smile away while reading your work, keep the flow coming my friend...

[†Tracey†]

This is a power packed punch full of so many interesting messages.. You had me smiling throughout.x I love the style and form.. it's a great write.

[Alpris]

This is a very unique piece, I must admit.
I like the dark humour in it, made me chuckle a few times. Well done.
The only thing I'd advise you change are the few spelling errors
"not loose it" change to 'lose'.
At the beginning stanza, change to 'whatever you think'
other than that, good formatting. Love the boldness at the beginning also, that opens it nicely.

[Brittni]

It's almost like a twisted game of poker with a even more twisted cast. Great read overall.

[Blindfolded]

I had to read it a few times just to get all the messages in here. Definitely makes you think.

[Muse]

Ssso many subliminal messages. Where to start. lol
I guess life is like a deck of cards. The hand dealt is not always the desired one. You can see if the grass is greener with a second hand..but it might leave you with something worse that a fat housewife? eeek
Great humor...I hope you get more hits...it was worth the read. :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Good advice in this poem. 17 is never no good. Nice flow of thoughts and and very good ending to the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote