Schofield Patent Revolver

Last moments at Little Big Horn.....................................

Breath............
Take your time
All the time in the world
Breath...........

Hammer is drawn back
Breath...........
Take your time
All the time in the world
Breath.........

Take aim
Breath.......
Don't take your time
You don't have all day
Breath........




FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Breath.......
Out of rounds
Breath........
Left hand to Holster.
Breath......


Empty...
Breath.....
Pray........
Ask God For forgiveness......




Grip Horse mane
Breath........
Swing......
Breath.......



One less Wasichu...........................
Breath............
New gun.............

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

I've read this a couple times...each time i get a fuller picture....nicely done sir!


Hey the kemosabi with the long golden hair? he's mine! ;)

[AreeshaJ]

very strong and powerful! i love it!

[GunMetal]

"Ask God For forgiveness"
Damn dude. This was powerful. It was soundless in my mind except for the thoughts, which were as clear as epiphany. Awesome.

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. i like the way you said here "BREATH!!" ahha.. GREAT WRITE.. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[Lily Mae]

A very powerful topic and you allowed me to feel as if I were there.. watching, hearing and smelling the whole moment..xo

[Josh Matteo]

Wow, this is amazing! I love your use of repetition throughout the poem. You are really an artist.
-Josh Matteo

[Michael G.]

I almost smelled the gun powder, and heard the grass crunching underfoot. (The more I think about it, I did hear the grass.)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Very Powerful.