Sounds of Thunder

Reviews

[Corset]

Last night I awoke by the sound of my own voice, and I was not dreaming of highlanders, but The quote was " There can be only one", I love the strength of this poem, the cracked earth was a strong vision, But is the Earth the enemy? Or just a broken foundation laying beneath your feet?

[W.D. Haley]

Wow. This is a headfull but I love it. Will have to read this again.

[JenniferMarie]

Well written.

favorite line, "Maybe you fail to see the ground, is that not broken earth beneath your feet." powerful and loved the image there.

Maybe I'm wrong, but is she pushing you a little. Wanting a reaction from you? You're hearing her, but not saying anything, but if she keeps pushing the sounds of thunder will come and I think it's just how a man holds things. not necessarily aggressive, but women sometimes don't understand that. then the sounds of thunder come.

It's late so I may be reading this wrong. I liked it though. I may need to read a few times to get it and that's a good thing.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The sound of thunder reverberates...causing a reaction. It was "due anytime now." This piece speaks volumes and demands to be heard. The thunder can bring out the most intense emotions. You have expressed this well. Excellent write.

"Maybe you fail to see the ground,
is that not broken earth below my feet?
Does the very sound of thunder trembling from my tongue,
provide a clear representation?" ~Message received loud and clear...Well penned.

[Southern Cross]

Maybe I am way off here but my interpretation was so very different. I took it as the writings of others and critiques that may not be so deserving and the awaiting of yours.. The thunder that will comment Gosh I tend to think out of the box most times..forgive me if I was way off in my review..just how I see it

enjoyed the read, nicely written

[LJW]

Here you go. See, my review is still here.

[Alexandria Reece]

The power of nature mentioned throughout really gives a power to your verses. 'Perhaps the rage behind my eyes
Perhaps the ring of fire circling around them?'
Those were truly two very well-put lines amongst many other good ones.

[LJW]

I found this to be terribly overwrought, like something a character in a Shakesperean type school play would utter, wearing red velvet outfits with stiff ruffly white collars.

Try and say the same thing in a more conventional, conversational tone.

[MoriartyMesa]

Would you mind pointing out where this is "terribly overwrought"

[Geralyn Miller]

Personally, I love thunder and lightning and wild storms; but then, I am a desert rat, so rain is an almost magical thing.
Too many people do not see or hear the glories around them; what a sad way to live. They choose a small narrow world, bleak and colorless; and of course, boring.