Warm Tears

Soft drops of warm water build
soft drops of warm water wrench the most secret parts of the human soul,
The soft drops build in soft strains,
soft strains of pain and sorrow.

Soft stream of warm tears,
no lie in tears
no truth in tears
Soft streams of warm tears pouring the confession of a heart,
lost in a stream of warm tears.

Tears become soft lite cries
Tears become soft small plea's
Tears become water swept windows of a lonely house.

Drops of tears,
Tears of drops,
Confessing?
Hiding?
Standing in plain sight



With soft warm drops of water,
coming from their eyes.

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

Tears don't lie, do they friend? I like how the repetition of the wording actually flows like tears down the page. The feeling being it, nicely contained. I adore "water swept windows of a lonely house", how precise and accurate when thinking of tears in eyes.

[darknewday]

In the spirit of how you name a musician to a poem, I would say this is a Type-0-Negative. Nice Imagery.

[darkness*star1985]

This is a sad write but it is written beautifully. Excellent write.