Warm Tears

Soft drops of warm water build
soft drops of warm water wrench the most secret parts of the human soul,
The soft drops build in soft strains,
soft strains of pain and sorrow.

Soft stream of warm tears,
no lie in tears
no truth in tears
Soft streams of warm tears pouring the confession of a heart,
lost in a stream of warm tears.

Tears become soft lite cries
Tears become soft small plea's
Tears become water swept windows of a lonely house.

Drops of tears,
Tears of drops,
Confessing?
Hiding?
Standing in plain sight



With soft warm drops of water,
coming from their eyes.

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

Tears don't lie, do they friend? I like how the repetition of the wording actually flows like tears down the page. The feeling being it, nicely contained. I adore "water swept windows of a lonely house", how precise and accurate when thinking of tears in eyes.

very nicely expressed.

[Deandra Dawn]

You did it again....amazing writing.

[Thea]

Tears tell so many things that are not easy to express...Such a beautiful piece...I really like it.
:)))

[SophiaKathleen]

This is lovely, and somehow brutally honest.

[Brittni]

Very simple: I love it.

[Kuhr Gred]

:) this is great! as always.. the flow of your expression well written :) keep it up ;)
- Kuhr gred

[MOON]

Poignant write love , Tears become water swept windows of a lonely house.

[writing mojo]

"Tears become water swept windows of a lonely house." such an incredible line that it leaves me opaque in the talent looking from outside...good stuff