Forever in the eyes

When love and passion comes,

it shall bloom and grow strong,

as the mirror image reflects the mind,

the purple of the vain an vane beat,





little tremors of the heart that beats,

the tear of regret,

the nails that dig into the skin,

the hot breath behind the ear,

a smile as the lips touch the neck.




A night will tell many truths,

a night with a matching heart beat,

but it can just as soon end,



Kissing in the wind,


In where feelings can be kept inside,


Too know,


too grow,


and understand.






If a candle's light shadows a room,
than it will explore the light of my spirit,
as the flame burns,
so shall a true heart.




 

Author's Note

Not my best work, but I was bored.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Simply said! Very clear, concise and it contains the components of good, solid poetry. Nicely rhyme and flow.

[sonnie ibadah]

"A night will tell many truths,

a night with a matching heart beat,

but it can just as soon end,"

beautifully expressed! thanx 4 sharing.

[00000000000000000000000..]

That was beautiful I really loved it:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) it's spoken from the heart is what I love within it so much toward a woman to be. Wow nice to hear I ant alone in them thoughts lol. I haven't taken time for a lot I am truly sorry I read ur about me. But I see beauty here lots of it man!!!! think you need to see it for you too man because this was very beautiful:)

[audrie]

If a candle's light shadows a room,
than it will explore the light of my spirit,
as the flame burns,
so shall a true heart.

lines in particular spoke to me

[PurpleQuartz]

Wonderful write!!! The flow is perfect!

[Awakened Rose]

"Kissing in the wind" is a lovely thought... This poem was effortlessly brilliant, thank you for sharing :)

[Corset]

not your best work huh? I beg to differ with you, inside all that drag racing exhileration that usually on your page, it is so nice to see that there can be a softer more romantic side of Mr. Mesa, I hope you are bored more often. One small thing, I notice that you always confuse your then's and thans, it might be easier to think of then, if you had less than, then is a "time" word, than is a comparative word, and honestly this poem rocks!