The Review

Sometimes I wonder if my vanity is so Awesome it requires correcting......nope

As a true Gael, I was dismayed to see the terms "Gaelic" and 
"Celt" ( note the correct spelling, a kelt is a spawned salmon) in this piece of claptrap masquerading as poetry

   

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MoriartyMesa

2 Hours Ago Let me understand something, just for my own part. What is exactly your problem with my work?

paulo

1 Hour Ago On reflection I may have been unduly harsh for describing your "work" ( I use that term loosely)as "clap-trap". Clap-trap and garbage generally can be recycled to produce something worthwhile. Your "work" on the other hand, is totally devoid of any merit. As one of my close friends wisely noted just the other day your "work" is just one big cliche re-worked ad naseum. You are fortunate, indeed, that no-one has sued you for damages, as your "poety" (again I use that term loosely) has the unavoidable consequence of rendering the reader physically sick. I would ask you to desist from further "writing" immediately, lest you cause serious harm. This is not just my opinion, it is shared by a large number of writers on this site, who frankly have had enough of the vile rubbish you serve up.

MoriartyMesa

33 Minutes Ago So what exactly are you asking me?

paulo

1 Minute Ago I'm sorry, what you should do could not be any clearer. Perhaps you should ask your mummy to explain? You need to know your limits, man. Your time would be much more gainfully spent in a pasttime that is not beyond your intellect, perhaps dwarf throwing or pig racing.

MoriartyMesa

0 Seconds Ago Well you are more than welcome to set up a Petition.

Author's Note

I want to thank the reviewer for taking the time to question, my Greatness.

Reviews

[Muse]

This is why you are awesome...take it as a f*****g compliment that this guy spent his time of day on you. He's green with envy. His friend too apparently. If your writing was fluff, he would never have commented on your stuff. With poetry....it may not always be warm and fuzzy...it sometimes turns the stomach. But that's what makes writing so surreal...it can appease to any kind of human emotion. So you turned his stomach that day, with that said....I will stand by your awesomeness. :))

[EMF]

One day, I'll give up my sobriety for a day and buy you and I a big bloody drink or two... or threee... maybe more.... Ever been deported? Thanks for this man. Truly

[Kaylor Mason]

Whoever he was, he certainly had a lot of hot air and not much else. He didn't say one thing factual or legit--just a lot of personal insults. It sounded like he was trying to make himself appear smart--someone should warn him to stop trying to think before he trips. Speaking of reworked cliches, I don't know what kind of writing isn't a reworked cliche--everything goes in cycles; there ain't nothing new under the sun. Even Romeo and Juliet wasn't supremely original--it was inspired by Wagner's Tristan and Isolde. I mean heck, even Star Wars drew heavily on ancient mythology

[Michael of Gilead]

hahahaha! I saw that, and thought...who wouldn't go off on this guy?

And you went and turned it around on him with his own *in a word i'm sure this true gael will know* priggishness.

Way to use a 10 gauge on a squirrel ;)

btw, poetry is spelled with an "r" not that I am the spelling nazi type, far from it...but piling on is fun.

[MoriartyMesa]

fun part is, I am half a Mic myself on my Mom's side. Still got family in West Cork and a few other haunts in the old country. Never in my life in dealings with the Irish have I heard someone use the more 'Ancient' words or the like. My cousins often say, 'Its only Irish Yanks who call themselves this or that"

[Michael of Gilead]

Never deal with the irish, they are lazy drunken slobs....who look remarkably like myself...wtf?

[Marie]

Sorry, I have no idea what went on here.

[Pax]

this is sad!
You know poetry is open to interpretation.
your a great person to stand in your point.
keep writing my friend.

[MoriartyMesa]

my main reason for posting this was to more or less show, why people go out of their way to be dorks for no reason.

[Pax]

poetry is like an open book, its either view in a good or bad way. Yours was merely an expression of what you feel and that's what makes it a poetry.. it doesn't intend to hurt someones ego its was merely stating facts in your life.