Envy

I wrote this about someone close to me. The feelings have passed, but I still think it captured the moment I fell hard.

Envy

 

I envy many things, many people, and many feelings…

 

I envy the sun because it gets to light up your day and put the beautiful glint in your eye. That glint I know is there even though I never seen your eyes. The sun gets to wrap its light around you and keep you warm, something I long to do.

 

I envy your hair, the way it brushes against your cheek softly. A brush, a simple brush against your cheek. Something I wish to do with a gentle touch every morning. The way it enhances your beauty and encases your gorgeous face.

 

The wind, a gentle breeze lightly kissing your skin. An action I intend on doing when we lay together. A breeze, a whisper against your neck, a whisper of love and devotion. Breathe in your sent and push back out a warm promise to always love you.

 

The beautiful necklace along your collar. The fact that it lays there lifeless without cherishing its position, creates this jealousy within me. It takes a position like that for granted. This place, this sensitive and privileged place that I would kill to be. A place that I would lightly trace with a soothing finger.

 

An envious person I am of all these things that take there existence in your presence for granted. There is nothing I wouldn’t do for a moment, a second, a life time in their shoes. One day…One day I will…

Author's Note

Ingore grammar please. I write how I speak.

Reviews

[Aekmy]

It's - rough and can get much better.
When you write try not to write how you think. Poetry, to me, is a different language and should be treated that way. I know you can do it, dispite what you may think.
"The fact that it lays there lifeless without cherishing its position," i like this line best. :D

Toodles. :]
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