Why?

Why?

A Poem by MorganLeanne10

Why live in the pain of yesterday when tomorrow is never promised?
Why stay in the past when the future is so much brighter?
Why frown when smiling is so much more beautiful?
Why dwell on mistakes when they just make you that much stronger?
And why wait for tomorrow to make a difference when you can start today?

© 2013 MorganLeanne10


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Not bad, but I feel it's a little too short - there's a lot you can do with this concept and it seems somewhat that you've just let the piece end right when it was getting good. Why not expand it further and perhaps answer some of those questions you posed?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2013
Last Updated on February 23, 2013
Tags: Why, smile, future, bright, questions, poetry, poem, writing, writer

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MorganLeanne10
MorganLeanne10

Grass Valley, CA



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My name is Morgan. I am 14 years old and just looking for some feed back (: thank you!! more..

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