Beaches

just a little love poem. i dont do these that offten so be nice

 

Sitting here hoping and wishing
With an empty hole in my chest
Lying on the desk top
With tears on my cheek
I close my eyes
I am dreaming of holding you tight
Under the dark starry skies
With sand between my toes
The smell of the ocean in the air
Sounds of the waves hitting the shore
Lying there with you I know my heart is whole
When I open my eyes I realize you are not there
Feeling this emptiness in my chest
Longing to be near my heart

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

you poured your heart into this one. felt the emptiness through your words. your imagery is so amazing... loved the flow in this piece. great ink

[qaralynn]

aaawh this is really sad..great work..like it

[Anthony J. M. Nelson]

A moving work that expresses those feelings of hope and longing for a loved one. Again you have found a way with your words that says much more than it seems.

[Bubo]

Very emotional and sad, when we yearn for someone missing..........love the connection to the waves.

[Jazmyne]

awww puppy luv! hehe who is this about sis!? a few words are miss spelled but its all good! this one is sweet and to the point. you miss that person and while at work you try to think of him but havin a hard time cause they arent in front of you. dont be sad....no tears on your cheek..before you know it your out of work and here with me! haha
just playin. good write!! ive read this before and liked!