Images

 

Sweet little faces
their brown eyes staring at me
dead at the first sight

Author's Note

b/c pple are keep asking me were the images are b/c that is what the title is.. it is what i see in my head when i close my eyes. that is why it is called images.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Just a few words that can say so much. I have unfortunately seen the same thing when I was in Vietnam.

[Dave "Doc" Rogers]

The short ones are the most difficult to weigh.
Haunting.
Nightmarish.
At first sweet, eyes staring, then noticing they are lifeless.
Difficult.

Well done in short haiku.

Cheers!
Doc.

[Vincent Maltese]

Thats powerful. and depressing. but good

[Adam Greenfield]

I love this. This is one creepy-a*s haiku! Great job.

[Bubo]

Seems to me those images bring thoughts of death and loss...........such sadness and a cold underlying feel.
The title works well.

[Jazmyne]

um....sis! this is kind of creapy yet it has to be said good! were are the images! hehe

[Red_Queen]

Very good.

Ironic though that the title is "Images" and there is no image to go with it.