The Critical Eye

Inverse

in verse

the critical eye

punctuates

punctures

past inflections

there is art in universal grammar

we do not speak the same language

but we writers

do bleed

the same blood

typed

in

calligraphy

 

 ©2010morabee

 

Reviews

[Sabyth Fay]

I agree with MIngram. I feel connected to everyone else who writes all of a sudden... I love how you used words of the same gender but had an absolutely different meaning. I adore poetry like this. Very well written; I can't wait to read more. Yay metaphors!

[MIngram]

Very intriguing. Your poem makes me feel a bond with all other writers. Although we express ourselves differently, we are one of the same. Nice