'The reference point I’ve yet to see…, whose more ‘crazy’… them, or me?' -A friend's response to this poem. I also enjoyed this Calvin and Hobbes comic I found relating to ignorance.
A myriad of staring eyes questions, answers, truths and lies Comprehensions varied so the muddled mix of yes and no A solid wall, an overt floor the kept shut out the open door Happiness, the pealing laugh, wounds not mortal full of wrath Gazing wonder, ignorance can you see it? not a glimpse...
No, that's not true, it's there, you see it, but never hear, no never, here. Unless you do, and do not speak it, for that strange human reason you have. Am I alone, or in fact the object of ignorance? And walk around with thoughts distempered, uncertain, perhaps what I perceive as you? It cannot be that you are closed to things I've known since thoughts began. Or is it me, closed off somehow, to something more that you have grasped? For ignorance is simple, yet complicated so, human's core, the heart of much, and so its own downfall...
The functions of the human mind the freedom there that we do bind The depth with which an eye can reach but sealed off tight where none can breach Priorities in the wrong place; find a purpose give it face The possibilities there are those 'lost' chances not so far Gazing wonder, ignorance can you see it? not a glimpse...
your rhythmic patters are exceptionally well developed~ they roll right off the tongue with clarity and ease~ it lends itself perfectly to the topic inherent in your poem flipping into observational mode a march of lemmings over the cliffs of ignorance~well done!~
I really enjoyed reading this. The language is wonderfully used, and it has a very clean structure. It is a very nice read, and I loved how the middle stanza delved into the deeper implications of ignorance. :)
your rhythmic patters are exceptionally well developed~ they roll right off the tongue with clarity and ease~ it lends itself perfectly to the topic inherent in your poem flipping into observational mode a march of lemmings over the cliffs of ignorance~well done!~
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