A Sad Smile

She walks strong,

With her head held high

Brushes off the hedges

Thorned without a cry.

She fooled millions

With her tilted fake smile,

Showed her life

Shaking the dead soul alive.

Hurt till maimed,

Only the strong rag remained.

Beautifully mirrored

Happiness so fake,

Could not stay hidden

From me, her best mate.

Behind the beautiful eyes,

I traced the pain so deep

Behind the pretty veil

I saw the hurt sad smile.

Reviews

[KristynRuth]

I got the same interpretation as Hobinal, very nicely written

[Panda]

I really liked this piece :) No matter how isolated you may feel, there's always that one person who can see through the lie whether they tell you that or not

[Nabeela Mobashwer]

Really appreciate the review, thanks a lot! =)

[Panda]

no problem ^^ Keep up the awesome writing!!