SAD PART

some pain

    The sea was called forth

    As part of earth

    And waters separate us 

    On land from land it must,

      

    Here we cast our cares;

    When our eyes filled with tears.

    But now the ocean can hold no more;

    Thus pain roam and bleeds my heart sore.

     

    The waves bashed the rocks to sand;

    And mortar the little that saves a man.

    Though beauty is a cost,

    So much, so much is lost.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I see the narrator uses the creation account and the elements of the island to pen this sad with truth poem. Like a contemplation of sorts on all these things. Excellent...:)..................

[Rose of many colours]

On Target Sami. You are on Target.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good. You are welcome...:).................

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you friend . Thank you so much