TWINS' ISLE

just want to know what happened

 

 

The sea will sing to the rhythm of the tide

And ignore the storm that passes so wide

This blew the magic off twins’ isle

And the pain of a thousand stings

Doth rise like mounds of rocky things

Never knowing what it brings

These patent and foolish acts

Making time frame diffracts

To lose sight of now, protracts

 Now this night is dawned

 Hope of a heavy burden

 Faze as light beacon-ed

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing description in your poem. I saw the sea and felt the waves. I love the ocean. Can't be controlled and allow us to know some kind of freedom when we are near her. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

"The sea will sing to the rhythm of the tide

And ignore the storm that passes so wide

This blew the magic off twins’ isle

And the pain of a thousand stings"

[Rose of many colours]

I haven't been on in a while. Thanks for the review. God bless Great writer

[Sami Khalil]

You too great writer...You are welcome...:).................

[Rachelle]

You are making me miss my home country.....

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you Rachelle for visiting. Time by the ocean feels great.

[Sami Khalil]

After the storms we look for the peace , after the dark nights we look for the beacons of light and after all said and done we still seek love and joy...A classic piece of great poetry...:)....................

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Khalil. You are so right. You understand this piece well. Love and Joy is nourishment for my soul

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)./..................

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Have a great day.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :>)...........................