LOVE FINDS ME

some one is very sad and lost and needs to be found,

LOVE  FINDS  ME

 

I paved my future with dreams of sanity

And fashioned it with sculptured vanity

My heart lost its: hallow ground

And wandered off in lanes dis allowed

 

Thorns of lies and doubt dug deep into my mind

And deviant thoughts to make me blind

Precepts fade like shadowed clouds

And wrong my soul off: all its shrouds

 

Wild with a hunger to escape

I searched the portals marked with shapes

My being quaked with soundless cries

I am lost and lost with endless sighs

 

On a cold plateau under moon and stars

Senseless moods and weary scars

One by one they let me be

Until, yes until: love finds me.

 

By Moonera Seegobin                                

Rose of Many Colours

Copyright ACT, 1997[ACT NO.8 OF1997]

January 2nd, 2014

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The search and journey for love. Can be sweet or painful. I liked the honest emotions and thoughts described in the words. Thank you dear friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your rhyme is flawless.I myself find it so hard to rhyme.This is a lovely poem :)

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you. I appreciate this visit. great writer

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Blue]

You penned this beautifully, Moonera. The rhyme, the flow, the message... You made me smile today. :)

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you dear writer. This has to be a blessing from God. Have a great day,dear friend

[Khushi]

The title itself is so good. N the poem, m speechless.

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you so much for visiting. I appreciate your comment.God bless great writer and a successfull new year

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid rhyming poem with great flow. The title , the wording and the imagery were all good. I hope love finds you all the time...Bravo

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Sami,I will hold on to such powerful comment.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:>).....................

[Rose of many colours]

I haven't been much in the mood to write.But thanks for the sparks you writers on writers cafe creates.
God bless

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you too for all...:)..............