THE LAST MAN STANDING

A war is on , who is willing to fight.

 

THE LAST MAN STANDING

 

There’s a war raging

How many on the line standing?

Free the drug addicts

And them that hit against the pricks.

Tis last man standing

Who’s on the line fighting?

 

One thousand and two thousand men

Sword in hand sends to defend

Armoured up the war aren’t end

Free from death abused children.

Tis last man standing

Who’s on the line fighting?

 

Turn around that aren’t bound

Lest you be confound

By the thief the killer on the loose

Free the man, free the man from booze.

Tis last man standing

Who’s on the line fighting?

By Moonera Seegobin

Rose of Many colours

31-10-2013

 

 

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

thought provoking and serious poem ...................... fight till we die, but thats not the case these days. well done dear

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Friend For visiting

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Some will fight, I seen a Revelations in this write idk if you do but when it come that time me will be in battle with swords and bows, I loved very powerful:)

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you my Friend,God bless your soul

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Very welcome Moonera my pleasure:) Smilessssssssss

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no enough are willing to fight...this isn't the sixties anymore..

many just turn away stick to their own little worlds...thinking.."as long as i am okay"---

very sad....a poignant, powerful piece of poetry.

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks for reading your comments are so true.. God bless great writer

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. A powerful social write. All these social ills are affecting so many individuals, families and the society at large. All these addictions are enriching some crooks , theieves and criminals but not enriching our lives and souls. I abstain from all of that but the media always are glamorising these things. No wonder the jails are full...Bravo for speaking up...:).......................

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you Samie for visiting. We in Trinidad suffer these ills and I am ashamed of what my country has become. It is Overwhelming.

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...You are welcome...:).............

[David Scott]

A call to battle with a sense of the urgency and the vanity of life as well.
The last man standing was standing on a cross...
He has held the line and the victory is already won.
Who is willing to fly the colors of the Victor?
Enthusiastic tone and a fine challenge.

[Rose of many colours]

Wow You figured that out, Amazing

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks for reading though God Bless

[David Scott]

It is always good to be reminded. We have stubborn blood and short memories. ;)

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Friend.