ABOUT TWO FRIENDS

they work together, think not alike, one is a virgin the other is not,

You and I are so different, yet so similar.

Daylight vs. darkness.

Strength of personalities at war:

Unequivocal claims meshing our doors with unbroken laws.

Thought processes clear and glazed with boldness,

                                    One is spontaneous and free.       

The other searches for reality

You and I are so different, yet so familiar,

A master of the art of speeches,

Who escorts who to the end of a sermon or thesis,

Verily I say, tis tug-of -war minds,

That has us undesirably mesmerized.

On the threshing floor, sweat and tears who cares.

Campaigning: hot on the trail unawares.

You and I are so different, yet so peculiar.

May-day, may-day, two of a kind: one on fire, one on water.

For the entire world we want to conquer,

I surrender to you the winner

There is no end to this matter,

We will take it all to the creator..

By Moonera and Dianne

Reviews

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This reminded me the 1st time I fell in love , I was all that and I cant go back wow it played with my mind after all said and done , I turned to wrong things after the break up took me forever to find myself, But I did:0 Awesome write Moonera:)

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you so much for the comment I appreciate it very much, you make it more meaningful..

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Your very welcome Moonera dear friend:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem a lot. Better to have two people who are different. Allow us to taste the four corners of life. I like the way you used the description. Allowing the reader to understand the value of true friendship. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Coyote..my friend and I we did write this poem together.. this is how we see each other..
read moreThanks Coyote..my friend and I we did write this poem together.. this is how we see each other..
God bless you good soldier..