SUNSHINE

Sunshine in Trinidad and Tobago, morning, noon,evening,names of places in Trinidad,

Some mornings ago,

Sunshine grew as a little plant In Mayaro

when miday comes not everyone delight under it's sweltering leaves,

But the birds  so wild ,chirping and hunting as Sunshine is free.

The bees with the happiest sound, buzz..buzz.. pollin for you and me.

Sunshine grew and grew, all colourful-yellow gold,red gold:

 And of course fire gold.

Clouds sighed and went to sleep,

Giving way to an ageless Sunshine as she spread herself,

Over the rivers, ravines, pitchlake and seas.

The whole of Trinidad and Tobago- flora and fauna,

Eat, breathe and live,

Under the Light it give.

Evening is here,

With no more time to spare.

Sunshine lays low into the ground..

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Sunshine is busy girl. Loved this piece of personification. Well done.

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Pryde for a delightful comment.. I am honored.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Over the rivers, ravines, pitchlake and seas.
The whole of Trinidad and Tobago- flora and fauna,
Eat, breathe and live,
Under the Light it give."
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines are my favorite. I like the way you described your home. You create good vision of beautiful places. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks ,I am honoured with your visit...and your generous contribution..

[Jwakefield]

What great work, really made me smile. I love the way it's arranged, it flows so well.

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Jwakefield , for you stopping by I appreciate Your comment, I am encouraged..

[Cassie]

I love the imagery you have created in this piece. very nicely penned.

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Cassie great respect to you..

[MsJewel]

You have created some beautiful images in this well written poem. I love the soft, peaceful flow of your words. Very nice :) Julie

[Will Neill]

Rose, We are all children of the Sun, its what gives us life, you celebrate it with ease.
Keep Well
Will

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks will I truely appreciate the comment.. I have never had an High school education .. so at the age of 30 I decided to get one..when I started I didn't have much knowledge of writing..and grammer.. so when I get comment like these I just soak them up.. and i get the drive to write more.. God bless you friend..Moonera

[Sami Khalil]

A magical place to be in. A marvelous poem you have penned. I like the imagery alot...:)

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Sami your comment is like a breath of fresh air.. I appreciate it very much.. God bless.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know. You are welcome...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

I have been to Trinadad and Tobago and the scenery there is so lovely....you have captured it in your poem. The onomatopoeia is excellent. A very serene feel to this one. I liked it. Lydi**

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Lady Lydia, you have educated me in so many words- to appreciate my country even more.etc

[SyberRose]

A lovely picture you have painted of your Trinidad...enjoyed...Rose

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks SyberRose for visiting my write.I truly appreciate it..