Lost Myself

This a poem/song that is for people that think they lost themself.

Chorus

I just lost myself and I can't find myself anywhere.

Can you help me please? I am just lost in this world. I just

don't know where I put myself but once I knew where

I was. I just lost myself and I can't find myself anywhere.

 

Verse

Please! Lord, God, Holy Spirit I need somebody to help me.

I remember when I was so happy now the happiness is gone.

The pain is growing is growing like a diease in my mind and heart.

I can't see the life I use to have is disappearing insight.

 

Chorus

I just lost myself and I can't find myeslf anywhere.

Can you help me please? I am just lost in this world. I just

don't know where I put myself but once I knew where

I was. I just lost myself and I can't find myself anywhere.

 

Verse

My family and friends don't see me but they now see somebody

much different they don't see the same girl that they saw one

year ago. When I look in the mirror I wonder who is the person

that I am seeing with my own two eyes. I look blank like there is no soul

in me.

 

Chorus

I just lost myself and I can't find myself anywhere.

Can you help me please? I am just lost in this world. I just

don't know where I put myself but once I knew where

I was. I just lost myself and I can't find myself anywhere.

Author's Note

Well this first thing that I will love you see is the words and what they ment. Do not ignore grammar problems if is any please tell me.

Reviews

[[untitled]]

This has great potential! I understand the meaning of losing one's self and feeling alone. These are heartfelt lyrics.

Grammar issues: "Course" should be "Chorus"; "Fine" in the first and last line of the chorus should be "find"; The last line of the second verse is missing "there" before "is" and maybe consider changing "it" to "me".

I think once you fine tune this it will be really great! It has a nice flow and many can relate to being "lost". Nice work.

[Whisper21]

I realize that this is a popular lyrics. Because I already have four reviews.

[Wildecat]

I liked this and love having God in my corner, this is a nice write.

[~The Queen~]

very well done. I liked it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

-The Queen

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

This is a very nice piece of work, do you write music? I like it And hope to read more. You seem to enjoy writing it comes out in the words